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Kakudo and suzanami by ~Raikenji:iconRaikenji:


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Submitted: May 1
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was up late last night and drew a simple view of both chars for a story im making.

anyways, characters belong to me.

also, help me out...does the posing look alright? im having trouble with the legs/ :/

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*Letdragon:iconLetdragon: May 1, 2008, 9:52:47 PM
It might just be me, but the poses look a tad like they're leaning in a little maybe.

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~jag-heter:iconjag-heter: May 1, 2008, 10:38:01 PM
Poses seem fine, although something seems a bit strange with the back of her knee area. Not too sure. In any case, they look teh nifteh, as per usual.

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~koopakid12:iconkoopakid12: May 1, 2008, 11:58:43 PM
its look perfect theres nothing wrong

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~Kuron-Kim:iconKuron-Kim: May 2, 2008, 12:16:20 AM
depends on what you wanted the pic to look like to call it "wrong" or "right"

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~TidalNight:iconTidalNight: May 2, 2008, 3:23:23 AM
As Letdragon mentioned, seems a little leaning - but it can be used as an emphasis on character personality.

Lookin good.
~Lorian-Dragon:iconLorian-Dragon: May 2, 2008, 4:20:01 AM
For me, Looks allright...but it's difficult to say because of grand number of lines. But don't care abot me, i am a poor amador.
~EmotionCreator:iconEmotionCreator: May 2, 2008, 7:17:42 AM
Great it does look like, but are you trying the "birdperspective" on this pic? (birdperspective = object(s) being viewed above them) Because if yes, then there are some major flaws on them. (I could explane that to you if you want to)

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*dewolfannaness:icondewolfannaness: May 2, 2008, 7:42:35 AM
I'm not too sure. You're right, something seems off. But I suck at angles.
Interesting characters though

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~Dragon-Commando:iconDragon-Commando: May 2, 2008, 10:26:30 AM
It actualy looks ok. Kakudo looks like he's leaning tward the viewer, and his hips are shifted to counterbalance him.

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